Many thanks for this variation. In the end, we liked better both the color and the font from your initial design... sorry ;-)
Could we please try 3 modified versions with the following changes:
1) Get rid of the T-shirt, but keep the panda (so have the panda directly inside the tag), so maybe make the panda a bit bigger, and also use the very light beige color from the T-shirt sleeves for the tag instead of pure white. Go back to the font from #9. Add a period (.) after Co. Try making the "& Co." a bit smaller than "Arthus".
2) Same as in 1) + move the writing “Arthus & Co.” below the tag and make it bigger.
3) Same as in 1) + 2) but try a serif font instead (like Georgia or other nice and classy serif font)
hi, no problem - thats how it works at first, bit of trial and error to see what direction you want to go in - one question - did you mean to also take away the solid white from the panda as well ? - other versions to follow shortly, keep the feedback coming!
Thanks a lot for all your lovely designs!!! My favourites now are #38 and # 40. I think David will mostly like #40, because we can see much better "Arthus & Co.". Could you try tu use the font of the #40 in the #38? Anyway, for the moment, I don't see what I can tell you more, because you're really close for what I was looking for... If you have any idea, using the panda theme... You know my son's name is Arthus which means Bear... So your designs are very appropriate...
Best regards,
Catherine
P.S: hope my english not too bad to understand (my husband's is much better;-))))
Here I've worked on the tag to give it a warmer antique feeling, and made the text brown - just experimenting! I think it works because the panda is still a very modern style, but the tag is classic and gives a more cosy feeling.
1) #62 with the "antique" shading is very nice, but could you please try to make the shading a bit lighter / more subtle ? Also is it possible to keep Arthus & Co. on the same line, and make the tag wider, like it was in the other versions ?
2) After speaking to a few people, they liked better #9 with the T-shirt.... sorry to keep changing our minds ! Could you try #9 with the font from #61 ?
3) Finally, could you try #62 with the changes asked in 1) but also put the T-Shirt back in ?
The only final comment would be to put back the beige back on the sleeves, and the very very light grey / beige background color back on the tag (like in #9). No hurry though, and I'll let you do your thinking to polish up on the design... ;-)
hi, in light of your current first choice having been removed for copyright infringement, I'd like to reassure you that my designs are completely original artwork, not copied or stolen from another source.