here is a stylized "A" that signifies growth and strength. you can use this for all your other corporations. feedback is very important to me, am i on the right track?
#5 is our favorite of your three designs - what if it was made to look more like an A and a wave(?) with the left side being longer and swooping up and the left side a bit shorter? still trying to find just the right look. thanks for your participation and hard work!
# 3 has a bit too much going on there - the A is a bit too busy. Thanks!
is this more what you have in mind with the A looking more like an a, and the swoosh? i can get more creative or can keep it simple...do you like the color used?
here is more of a swoosh, are you visualizing more of a classic look or abstract? abstract can be more creative than a classic look....classic or classy.
this is 29, i deleted it by mistake...is simplicity more your style? You prefer this by itself or would you prefer seeying this with other shapes? thanks for your feedback so far.
Sooo...thanks for all of your participation. We really like the style of the A and swoosh and swoop, but apparently I got it a bit backwords. Can we see the A with a longer angled straight line on the left hand side, with a shorter swooped downstroke on the right hand side? The same general dimensions as #32 but with the stright and swoop reversed. does that make sense?
i don't think this works well, but i wanted to show you because this is what you mentioned...longer straight line on left and shorter swoosh...what do you think? I'm trying to figure out exactly what you are visualizing
Sorry for the delay in giving you feedback - you've certainly been putting a lot of effort into this - we appreciate it. #54 - I agree that it would work with with other business names,. However, the look has a bot of an asian feel to it, which doesn't really reflect our business. I'm glad that you are experimenting with the swoop, however, I agree that some of them didn't really work. I'm having a hard time conveying what we're looking for. I wish I could draw it here so you could see it. with the swoosh in #53 - can you make it with the same shape/angles as #30, keeping the straight line on the left and the swoop on the right, - it needs to look more like a wave. the straight line in #53 is to upright and the swoop needs to be more angled down that out.
Does any of this make sense? Thanks for all of your hard work.
perhaps this is more like it...i know it's a process to achieve your exact vision...and not being in person with you can make it a bit more challenging. Your feedback is excellent, so please keep it up for me.
Hey VIDI, Sorry! I thought I posted a comment over a day ago and it's not there! The wave is getting closer. it might be a bit too much at angle now, so can you make the straight line just slightly more up and down? also, without the grey - just the white on black looks better. the boss is back in the morning and will have more to say then.
to VIDI: I admire your persistence and your hard work. You've been the most attentive and responsive with comments and entries, but it looks right now like we're leaning to another design. If we go with another designer I will be sure to rank some of your entries in our top 10 - there is some really good work here!
p.s. a general question - do you know if it affects a designers ranking negatively when CH's move designs to the "not interested" side of the page? just curious.