i like #425 , i see a potential to something, but lets brainstorm together on this one and see how we can develop it further ok ? i like the strips coming from together to further apart, my concern is with the shape framing them ( i supposed it was an eye abstract ? ) it looks good coming from underneath them, but i am not liking that part where it comes above, would it look better if it was opened up ?
or can u think of something to tie it down there ? i want u to play around that concept, the stripes are good and i love there feeling from being tight together and spreading out, but i feel something is missing, its that thing in grey thats putting it off and i wanted to replace that with anything else, any ideas ?