This is a good start. I like the font. "triathlon club is a little subtle. This might be OK if you come up with a graphic as described below. I would like to see a unique and simple graphic that communicates "Triathlon" Perhaps a USA flag emblem to give it a "global" feel and to indicate that Ann Arbor is in the US. (?)
Magmion -#7, #8 ; I like the direction you are going. The graphic is better, however, it sort of looks like a fish. Do you have any ideas to make it look more "triathlon?" See my brief update for some existing ideas, maybe they will inspire you. Thanks !
Magmion, I received feedback from a member that they would like to see the "Triathlon Club" more prominent. Can you try one or two this way in your next iteration please? Thanks, Jim