I quite like this design - nice job. I'm wondering how we could move the dollar sign from "Angels", which already has the halo graphic element, to the S of "Entrepreneurs". Just curiosity, what do the curved lines (which I like) represent - are they a graphic element tying things together or are they representative of clouds?
Ok ssillcox, Thanks for your feedback I'll try to make your request tommorow morning because its 10 pm in indonesia, and my files is at work. And the curved line is the angel wings protecting "the entrepreneurs". I use this because i read your brief that your business is providing a financial backing. Maybe i'll try to make some variations to the design. Thanks again for your feedback
Paul! Many thanks for the great efforts! Sticking with #13, which I like best of all, could I ask you to try two more versions? Feel free to say "No thanks" if you don't want to of course!
1. Using #13 as a starting point, could you make the last letter of Entrepreneurs a dollar sign instead of only an S. You might want to make it a big bigger than the rest of the letters, which might balance the large A in Angels. I think I would leave the $ in blue rather than making it red.
2. Using #13 as a starting point, in this version could you change the font used for the word "Entrepreneurs" from the one you have chosen to the font used by entry # 11? Part of the reason for asking this is to differentiate between Angels and Entrepreneurs, and part of the reason for asking is that I am concerned that the word Entrepreneurs is a bit hard to read in the font you have chosen. In this version could you also try making the last letter S into a dollar sign?
Hi ssillcox, I'll try to make your request. And i'll change the font "the entrepreneurs" but maybe different font from entry 11. I'll choose the appropriate font. Thanks again for the feedback. Ps : I'll upload tommorow morning indonesian time (+7 GMT)