pamoroan, I just recently learned of my ability to send messages directly to designers, so I apologize if this is the first feedback you've gotten from me. I like your approach of capturing the In Focus words inside the focus of a design. I'd like to see additional ideas you may have of designs that play off of the In Focus concept (or alternatively that play off of the Analytics concept). I'm not a big fan of this color choice (I really like the bolder colors used by some of the other leading designs), and I still think that serif fonts lend a greater air of trustworthiness and old-school professionalism.
I do hope that you will continue to suggest more designs, and I promise to respond to those designs more promptly in the future. Thanks, Phil