Howdy. Thanks for taking the time to put together so many entries. You have a cool style and I appreciate your efforts to combine my initial directions into your designs. If you haven't already, I would recommend reading the updates that I've posted since my original post, as well. I like Entry 7 and 8, but need a font that will be both easy to read on roadside signs at 40 mph and convey some sense of corporate strength.
I like the simplicity of your approach, but would be interested to see a version of 7 and 8 that has some design elements that evoke the lines of a building, preferably a one-story storefront with either Art Deco, Streamline Moderne, or the sort of Frank Lloyd Wright lines that Target has been using in their architecture recently.