Howdy. I love entry 44. As I stated in my design updates, that kind of roof line says that I am selling homes or houses for people to live in, but I am a real estate agent for stores and shopping centers, so could you try changing the roof line so it looks like either a vintage retail building or maybe a city skyline? I do really like how clean your design is, though, so I'm not asking you to make it too busy or complicated. Also, the word "analog" can refer to old audio/recording equipment from the 1930s-1950s and that design aesthetic is something I REALLY like, so if you were to do a web search for images of analog VU meters, I think you might find some really cool ideas for a way to incorporate that look into the roofline/window part of your design. I'm not sure what the rules of this website are, but if you're allowed to contact me with questions or feedback, please do. I really like what you've done so far.
Thanks,
John