I was just looking at it and thinking just a simple curved line like a veil from where the top of her head would be to maybe between the a & m in american might help.
Can you make the line of the veil go up farther like it is sitting on top of her head. If it goes from the top of her head it will give the shape of her head.
#116 The reason I rejected all the ones with that particular dress is because of the bump around where her knee would be. That is why I went with the logo with the dress that is a little more slim at the bottom. Could I also maybe see it with a different font. I do want something very readable. Thanks!