Hi Tsquare. Entry /17 and #16, We don't see the name or our corp enough. Too much attention on the background. Plus will be hard to print on a shirt or cap. Entry #18 is very cool. Don`t hesitate to make variations. For #18. please don't hesitate to include a bit lighter blue and some green. For #19, we don't like the U turn! Try out some other variations if you can of #18. You're on a good path.
Hi Tsquare, we like your concepts... getting there! We like the last one Entry #34 from all the samples sent so far. We would like to see about 3 derivatives such as: Option A) One version of #34 with a bit darker blue ALTITUDE but not as dark as Entry #18. Also.. please add a touch of green somewhere but not as much as on entry #28 (green square is too much green). Check out how Entry #8 has the blue in gradation. Option B) one version of #34 but with a font looking like www.spiritaero.com logo. Could also be a font that looks like dassault systeme's logo.. check www.3ds.com. Option C) please take OPTION B but add a little mini plane at the end of the line crossing the letter A of the abstract logo ( not the A of Altitude). Entry #18 has a some sort of point coming out of the abstact square so in the same idea.. just add a little plane or arrow sort of coming out of the square. Hope this helps.. so total 3 more derivatives Options A, B and C.
OK thanks! If you can also make a version of Entry #39 but not in Italic font. I think with the square abstract symbol.. better no Italic font. Also maybe a tad bigger plane at the end of Entry #40. Very nice. I will rank them once I get the rest tomorow morning. rgds,
Hi Tsquare... our president initialy liked the abstract symbol but is now considering steering away form the squarish button figure. This is why I ranked it now lower but please feel free to try something different. Still you are doing very nice work. Regards,
Just FYI I am being accused of coping another guy I don't feel like it is but I could lose and my logos will be removed. If you feel strongly about you can protest but since I am not first choice i will see how this turns out