This is pretty interesting. I'll have to see what my peers think about this. You'll notice all my other choices have nothing but straight lines and sharp corners. This is the only one with organic shapes in the mix.
You get points for this one being different and interesting, but it just doesn't really fit our business. Looks like it should be for a biotech or telecommunications firm or something.
I like this, and I think you are headed in the right direction. It'd be great to see a few minor variations of this. For instance, I might like to see the triangular white space at the bottom of the mark be a little bigger. Also, you could toy with the line where the red and black meet. They are kind of staggered right now, and it just seems a little imperfect.
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