I really like the changes you made, if she had on black shoes that would be great. I like what you did with the hair and the dress color is much better. I kinda wanted a lot of pearls you know how women are drapped in pearls liek the Audrey Hempburn breakfast at Tiffany's picture. Here is a link...like multi roles of pearls.
http://image.guardian.co.uk/sys-images/Arts/Arts_/Pictures/2006/12/05/breakfast460.jpg. I like the font on #13 but I dont love the font. If you look at the font for the my pink button logo done by crayons on this site, I LOVE that fun, it really stands out, Im not saying i want that font but something that is unique and stands out like that. I think you are doing great and so far you are in the lead of this competition. Good Luck