# 55 and 56 - Very cute! We like this a lot any ideas on how to incorporate the tag line. You are very talented and we would be interested in any other ideas you might have.
This is a general comment but I am also going to give a lot of people the same individual suggestion.
If you used a stethoscope in your proposal, we are curious to see how it would look if the long rubber tube spelled out our tagline “Healthcare for Kids. Helpcare for parents.
You could also try making the metal tubes that connect from the center T to the ear pieces read “healthcare for kids” and then the plastic tube say “helpcare for parents”. We don’t know if this idea would look good but if it does, it would be kind of cool. Thanks
Again, these are really cute and really "pop" off the paper at the viewer. It is cool how the character’s yes draw the viewer to the name and how the stethoscope tube pulls the viewers eyes across the whole drawing. The character does look a little like a frog, however. Any ideas how to make it look less like a frog or did you intend for it to look that way?
Thanks for the feedback. Here are some different tagline ideas. I emphasized "Helpcare" in some versions. Please, let me know if you want any more changes or you want to try something else.
Could you try making the face and tube a color like purple? Also could you make the ear bud dimples and the bell a different color than the rest of the scope. Thanks.
DL we have decided that we like your design the best but we just want to try some different looks to see which we like the best. Here are some things we would like to try:
1. We do not like the stethoscope being green. 2. We would like you to try some different, bolder, colors for the stethoscope. The purple and blue ones might be ok but we work with kids and moms so bolder and brighter is helpful. You might even want to try a bold pink or other female color. 3. The tag line printing is too light to be read. We like the tag line format in 81 but you could also try the stethoscope designed below the name, like 81, but then have the tag line embedded into the stethoscope tube.
We may come back with some more small changes once we get the basic colors and format right but you are the only designer we are still working with so you can do the additional work knowing you will get paid for your efforts.