Alfahannen (Alpha Male)Logo Design Contest

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with long hair :)

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#6 This logo is the entry with the best appearance of the letters / word "Alfahannen". Can you try to make it a bit less tilted (more like #5), but with stright lines like #6.

I like the shape of #6.

I am not sure about the "mascot" / the man. I think he is too much, too much muscles, too much like a cartoon super hero. I want him to be a bit more like a normal man, but still needs to be "the Man" - the alpha male. Understand what I mean?

I will rank soon.

#9: Yes, I think silver instead of white can work!

using cloth silver miner :)

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#6: Hi Ketut!

I like the shape of #6. Keep the stright lines (not like at #8). But make the logo (Alfahannen) less tilted (#8 has a nice tilt).

Use black and silver, with silver letters in the logo (#8 is good).

Or perhaps the best is black letters and black mascot, and the rest is silver??

The mascot is too much of a super hero cartoon. It looks like the mascot for the competition "the strongest man on earth". It should look more like "the toughest trail runner on earth".

The mascot #7 is the best so far. He is more of a "wild man" which we like. Perhaps you could try to work more on this one?

Could we try this?

#7: Could you remove the mustache and replace it with a beard? And give him less muscles. And use the logo (ALFAHANNEN) from #6? And use silver instead of white. And perhaps use silver as background behind the mascot? Could that work? Thanks!

please see and i will drawing for the less muscle for this mascot :)

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silver bckground :)

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:)

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#21: This is very good!
Could you give the mascot a white/silver background (the air behind him)?
Could you try how a less tilted logo looks (more like the tilt at #8), by less tilt I mean that I would like to see the logo (Alfahannen) more from stright forward).
A bit smaller muscles would make the mascot more like a tough trail runner.

#23: This entry, but with the mascot in black will be nice.

#21 is still the best entry (after you have sendt in #30 to #34). Could you go back to #21 and:
Could you give the mascot a white/silver background (the air behind him)?
Could you try how a less tilted logo looks (more like the tilt at #8), by less tilt I mean that I would like to see the logo (Alfahannen) more from stright forward).
A bit smaller muscles would make the mascot more like a tough trail runner.

ok :) i will send it now

white background and air touch :) i will chanfe the text more straight :)

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:)

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#37: I would like to see this entry, but with a black mascot and a white/silver background. Do you understand what I mean? Could you try?

silver background :)

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#48: Could we try this one, but with the same use of colors as #21 (black mascot and silver letters in the logo).

#49: I like this very much!

#82: Welcome back ketut! I think the mascot has too much muscles. He should be more of a runner, with less muscles. It is interesting to do something with his mouth. This one was perhaps a bit too open. But you could try a few different ways of doing it, and it might work very very well. Thanks!

#49: This is still a very good logo and mascot. He has more muscles than we like. And there is something strange about his face. His shape, hair and beard is cool!

#49: Your logo is great. We consider that you have succeeded to design the personality of the alpha male. But he has more muscles than we like. And there is something strange about his face. His shape, hair and beard is cool! Please read my comments on the other top 6 ranked entries, and you will understand better what we are looking for. Thanks for trying!

send again :)

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