#41 I really think we're getting there. I have a couple more suggestions however.
I don't know if i like the way the wire is laying (up and down). I like the way it comes from behind the mic, loops around behind the mic and begins to underline my name, but not feeling the way it dips down, then back up then down. Keep the wire at the same height as the "LD" in "ALDO" all the way thru til the last or last two letters of my name ("AN") and have it end the way it does right now!
Also, you see how you have a white streak going thru the wire to give it depth or sheen? Could you try that going across my name as if a light is reflecting on my name? I've been meaning to ask you that.
You're still in the lead as you can probably tell.