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I collected some additional feedback here without our organization and a few comments came to light.
#4: It draws the eye to a simple focal point and gives a sense of two people, 1 doing a headstand off the other -- as if they are in acrobatic playfulness. Is there a way to meld this style with the circular nature of #3,
#9. Maybe a triangular pose?
#3: Can you remove the center lettering? Would like to see it without the AS in the center, just a pictorial. That should help to open up the design a bit and, perhaps, soften it.
Thanks for all your work so far!
Thanks,
W