Hello Night Owl - Thank you for all the submissions for my company. I like very much the concept you designed in #58, #59, #60 and #61. Could I see how those designs would like with minor modifications as follows:
#61 - I really like this design A LOT! - Could I see you change the font for just the word Adventure - make it en elegant font like a script, but make sure it is a bold font as sometimes, script fonts are very dainty and hard to read . Also the word "By" should not be capitalized, it should be "by". I think this will be my #1 choice.
#59 and #60 - Also, could I see the name of my company represented a little differently. I'd like to see the word Adventures on a line by itself, with a bold script fond, because I want that word the emphasis. Then by the Book can be on a second line and in front like entry #61. Could I see what #60 looks like with a black font
#58 - I like this design very much as well. Again, I'd like Adventures on one line and in a stronger, bold font, but still script. Then by the Book in the second line
Thanks - as of this time, I think your designs are the frontrunners, so I am anxious to see these minor revisions.
I submitted a few new versions. Hopefully I have the revisions requested in the mix.:)
I tried several script typefaces and customized the one's I felt might work in bold and set on a curve. Because the curve creates a more acute slant to all script fonts, it took a few attempts to get the look right. Also, I did a few with a more traditional serif typeface for "by the Book". Please feel free to make any additional revisions.
Thank you.
Marcelo
PS - on a couple of them I added a very, very light yellow tint to the pages. This is not for an aged appearance, but rather to soften the contrast. Feel free to mix-n-match.
I am very impressed with your designs. You listened to everything I asked and took your own creative liberties to make those suggestions even better. These are exactly the type of designs I was looking for! Thank you so much.