Advantage Flag LeagueLogo Design Contest

Make city names more interesting and prominent. Not sure the crest would size or fit properly on custom football designs. previous design for footballs at:
http://www.mediafire.com/imageview.php?quickkey=mgmwnnmjgji

Like the general idea and 5 stars - since 5 divisions in league.
Like the football in center, but try to make more like our current league ball.
Crest is good, perhaps more modern, less traditional.

Hi! thank you for your feedback! here you have the updates! i hope you like it, best regards Fernando.

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Put dashes or bullets instead of commas between cities. Try to have "Advantge Flag League" pop more form the design. Try to darken the blue a bit to be like on website logo currently used. Once again, great steps in the right direction for sure.

Looks great. I really like the concept. One thing to address would be the pop of the website info. The text colors of entry #13 (below the football) might look great with the football on entry #14. Maybe if the pattern was rotated/shifted a bit or the web address could be placed below the swirl pattern to allow for better visibility?

Hi, thank you for your feedback! here you have more...
I replaced the eye of "A" for the stars, because you have 5 "A"! so it's great but i don't know if you like it!
Best regards, Fernando.
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Better visibility of web adress. Regards, Fernando.

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Still like #14 & maybe loose the www and just have YLAFL.com and have in just in the red stripe or in white part of football.... #19 is good too but not in love with the black wrapping around to the front of the football. Great job thanks so much for all the revisions... Keep up the good work!!!

Thank you! Maybe #21

Regards, Fernando.

or #22

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Can you make a version that is less like a square overall shape, and more like an oval simualr to #27. Basiclly so the text is larger under the football. I don't know if that makes since to you, but what I am trying to achive with this edit is it filling out a football when it is printed on an actuall football.
Also, is the city names the same red as the football red? We need to try to keep to on 3 printing colors...
Thanks!!!

Here you have another option. I hope you like it, tell me if you need some changes and i will do it for you.
Best regards, Fernando.

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Was still hoping ot see anohter version of the badge style like # 9 with comments added as previously noted.

Hi, thank you for your feedback! here you have another version. I hope you like it! Best regards, Fernando.

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#50 Trail from the ball try Blue or black instead. Add "Brea" to cities listed.
Any chance to also see this general info laid out like the shield shown previously, entry #9?
Looks good.

Hi YLAFL, here is the shield. Regards, Fernando.

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Hi, i don't understand the meaning of Brea? please tell me in other words or give an example. Sorry about that.

Regards, Fernando.

option font for cities

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#53 nicely done. Last touches as follows...
look at Razor # 42 submission, try to add a flag like that instead of black swoosh inside of the shield.
Have the flag stop before it wraps around and shows onto the right side of the football. Have the flag only display on the left side of the ball. It looks like a flag football flag set with that banner, which is our product.
Add "Brea" to cities listed (Brea is another local city that we serve with our product) and try to make cities more prominent while still fitting in the shield. Maybe if the ball itself shrunk a little it would work.

update!

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The flag needs to be contained inside of the shield. Smaller ball, flatten out the angle of the ball a bit, which would allow for a longer and thinner flag to trail off of the football on the left side, more like # 42. Thanks for getting these back to us so quickly, we are really getting close to our final.

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Option #3 (Entry # 64) is closest to what we were thinking. If you see the relationship between ball design and flag attached to ball on Entry #42, that would be what we are really looking for from the design shield concept. Thanks for the mods and options.

Thank you for your feedback! here you have another option, i hope you like it! Best regards, Fer.

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Option with cities with another font...i think with the website on flag you got the movement of a real flag! I hope you like it! Fer

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#66 works, please remove background inside of shield. Place web address in bottom section of circle.
Remove the stars and put web address in their place. This is getting very good and close. Thanks.

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#82 looks awesome, great job of incorporating all ideas. Please provide a version with red stars instead of red dots between the city names just in case.

Yes sure, i will prepare for you now! Regards, Fer.

with red stars, regards Fer.

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Could you prepare a version that uses the font from #88; really like the clean look, general idea and total design of you submission #83 (currently ranked #1 as a result).
The font used in the version #83 is good for the most part, but we are hoping to get something with a lot of pop for the eye when they see it. A view from a distance is key as they will be on "game day" canopies, all league footballs, apparel, etc.
If the text could somehow stretch and get taller with an interesting font (like #88) then it would work even better. Thakns for all your efforts and responding so well to feedback and suggestions, it really has helped to get to such a good design. Thanks.

Hi YLAFL! thank you for your feedback! i will prepare a new version tomorrow in my office. Now i am in home and I need to sleep to get the BEST logo for you tomorrow!!! I want to win so you will get the BEST!!!

Best regards, Fernando.
Good night! see you tomorrow...

Hi here you have an updated! let me know if you need some adjustments. Regards, Fer.

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Fernando,
Great job on the logo #104. Please redesign the word Advantage. We would like it to run straight across the log0, no swirl up and down. It looks a bit too busy in its current form.
We are considering closing this contest early as we have 3 great design options already and yours is still in 1st place. Thanks again.

Yes sure i will do it for you! Regards, Fernando.

Hi, here is the update! Best regards, Fernando.

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