I like entry number 1, i'd like to see some different fonts for the sports & fitness centers tagline. I'd also like to see the original concept expanded a bit to see other layout options.
I'd like to see entry #1 refined such that parentheses around adrenaline are shaped more like a person, or maybe it is 2 different people in an active position
I'd like #1 to have a different font for the word Adrenaline it reminds me too much of Gatorade, I want something that stands out better, more modern and less common. I would also like the Sports and Fitness Centers moved to the right and upward a bit so that everything isn't so centered
#44 is getting closer. I want the Sports and Fitness Center font from #1. I want the word Adrenaline to not be washed out, it needs to be a different color perhaps just white and I want the word Adrenaline in a different font. I want the word adrenaline in a font that is consistent (not concaved in the middle), aggressive and modern. I want the human bodies that parenthesize the word Adrenaline to spaced from the word Adrenaline a bit. As of right now the word Adrenaline is washed and it is the most important piece.
Chad, I think you may have it with #62..could you take out the black web like thing behind adrenaline? Same with #61. I really like both of these the best.
Chad, could you take the people out of #63 and maybe add just 1 person at the end of the word adrenaline? Could you make the person seems as though they are sprinting?
So close and I love the tracer effect. I think this will be the last request but could you shape the person/ character more like the "S" in VASTA on the following website www.vastasports.com?
1) Could I see #168 with the red "S" from #142? 2) Could I see #168 with the black "s" from #151? 3) Could I see #168 with the person in red versus black?