Example #4 There are a lot of elements going on. I'm looking for something a little more simplified. Not all the amusements need to be shown on the logo. Also, the greens and blues need to be brighter, the overall color scheme is too dark.
Hello, thank you for your feedback. I`d love to upload some new versions that I`ve been working on, but in order to do so, I need to have at least one entry ranked (that how top 5 contest phase works). If you are still interested in seeing my designs, please rank my entry #4 and that way I will be able to upload new entries. Thank you. Best regards, Bob.
Hello-thanks for the comments! Here are the changes you requested.I hope you like it! If there`s any other option you would like to see, please let me know. Thanks. Kind regards, Bob.
Everyone keeps going back to example #4. For #4 please use the blue in "action town" from #48 for the action town lettering and take out the town background in the lettering. I feel that the word town is hard to read and maybe a color change will correct it. Also for #4 change the "florida" to a modern type face and the color of the crosshair so it can stand out a little more.
Hello here are some variations based on your feedback. I changed A & T into the capital letters and adjusted letter color so it looks more like #48. I'm waiting for your further feedback. Thank you, best regards, Bob.
Entry #65 - Awesome! We're getting there. I would like to see the crosshairs white and the splat a neon green. Also, I'm not sure about the joystick color, maybe try that in a neon green or a black fade to grey. But, I like the red added in there, maybe try the joystick in a red, just not sure, I'm open to suggestions. I think at this point just a few color changes should do it.
Example #69 Let me see how it would look for the crosshairs to be in the "o" in action and remove the splat. Make the crosshairs at the same angle as the "o" so it looks like it is part of the font. Also make the bounce house like you did in example #46 where there is a base to the bounce house the same color as the tops. Change the bounce house red part to the green you used in the splat for #69.