Access Children's Dental GroupLogo Design Contest

Hi,
Thank you for the extra time that you have given us. I would really appreciate if you could comment so that I can make revisions or go for a different version.

İlkay

Thank you for your designs! I am interested in seeing #28 with the following changes:

-"Children's" in a different type of font (or maybe the same one with thicker letters)
-One of the children with a different hair color

Thank you!