We've moved #124 to the not interested pile as we felt it was too close to The Day's designs!
Please could we see some revisions to #116? Could the arch over the patient be our slogan instead of dots? I'll leave it up to you whether it looks best in upper, lower or title case.
Also, we're not keen on the 3 cushions under the patient. How would it look with 1 long cushion which is flat at the bottom and follows the contours of the patient at the top? Perhaps you could play around with a few ideas.
We're starting to favour the Absolut in sentence case - it seems to have a friendlier feel. Do you think this would work with you design?
We are planning to have an office meeting to discuss all the designs tomorrow morning (about 14 hours from the time I am posting this) and I hope you will have time to prepare a couple more revisions for Chris to present at the meeting.
Please could we see the following revisions to #175 (these are all separate revisions)
1 - change the green parts to red 2 - try some different typefaces that make the word Absolut more prominent 3 - as 1 and 2, but with the slogan under the Absolut and the arch in dots again
Please could you change the typeface on #199 to the one you used on #193. Also, we're not allowed to refer to other designers, but we prefer a brighter green.
Re f#220 Please could you try this with a few different shades of green an also try some different typefaces for the slogan. Also, how would this look if the slogan were in lower case?
RE #220 please can we see the slogan in different ways, for expample, the "BETTER PATIENT CARE" to follow the line of the body. and can we see it below the ABSOLUT.
also donadell, we want to put this logo on some of our Blue bags, can we have that ready to, once you have done the above you will be the winner, thank you for all your hard work :)