Hi Donadell,
We've moved #124 to the not interested pile as we felt it was too close to The Day's designs!
Please could we see some revisions to #116? Could the arch over the patient be our slogan instead of dots? I'll leave it up to you whether it looks best in upper, lower or title case.
Also, we're not keen on the 3 cushions under the patient. How would it look with 1 long cushion which is flat at the bottom and follows the contours of the patient at the top? Perhaps you could play around with a few ideas.
We're starting to favour the Absolut in sentence case - it seems to have a friendlier feel. Do you think this would work with you design?
Best regards,
Deborah