Dear Zennyase,
I am very impressed with Entry
#259. Especially how you outlined with white. That was brilliant! I don't know what you can do to improve the design. I can't think of any negative criticism.
If you want to try to design another type of logo that would be nice. In any event, I can tell you that Entry
#259 is going to be one of the designs that I'm going to consider when I look for the winner.
EL