This is an interesting take on the region. I don't think it will hold up smaller or in black and white. Good thinking though. The text seems a bit boring. Other treatments have done some interesting things w the text
I like 57 - but I'd rather see the whole map of CA - the blobby shape doesnt help - but the greet dot does. Plase do not connect the N's 58 is interesting in how the letters stack against the map...