We like entry #14 the best of your submissions and would like to see it with the background not as blue - either a pale grey/silver or white. Possibly fade a grey/silver background from darker at the center to white once it gets to the edges. Please add more scroll work to the Fleur de Lis and possibly some gold. Your lettering style is great on #14 and I would like to see just a bit of scroll work under the name. Thank you very much - your work is outstanding.
#39 Added more scroll work but I might reduce the fleur de lis slightly as it seems to overbearing compared to the company name in this format.
I'll start playing around with the colours, was just trying to get the overall layout first. What type of gold would you prefer, something more yellow? as the current one is a very pale matte gold.