Font is better, but still doesn't feel quite perfect. Is it possible for the sparkles to be white? Also, how does this look on a solid navy blue background? Thanks for the update.
We like the new font you chose. Can you put it on a bluer background color like some of the other entries. I guess they are closer to royal blue than navy.
Can you find a font-weight somewhere between entry 24 and 49 - the 'illi' part in the first word runs together a bit too much and is hard to read, even though we like the font overall.
#81 is the same font as 49, but with increased spacing between the letters to increase readability. #82 and #83 are different but similar fonts. Made the tagline an off-white, but looking at it again on my monitor it may be hard to tell - maybe too light? Let me know if you'd prefer it darker since it might read differently on your monitor. Thanks for the feedback.