GárgulaLogo Design Contest

Hey, azkha!

First of all, thanks for entering our tournament! We liked the idea your logo presents and we think it has potential. Here is some feedback to help you adjust a few things we would like to change:

Basically we are talking about #15:
1) The format of the label could be similar to the #13 or #3, because it's easier for us to print it.
2) The "500ml" is kind of to emphasized, it could be a bit smaller. Another cool idea that we had, is that it could be inside an emerald stone (like this http://www.google.com.br/imgres?q=emerald+stone&um=1&hl=pt-BR&sa=N&biw=1440&bih=785&tbm=isch&tbnid=ahIfq8Ku2ZBvhM:&imgrefurl=http://www.indiamart.com/shubharatna-diamond/natural-stones.html&docid=X8NP27AewR9gGM&imgurl=http://2.imimg.com/data2/HH/NT/IMFCP-1826842/natural-emerald-stone-794006-250x250.jpg&w=250&h=250&ei=ujLeTru1E4L00gGdm7XKBw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=930&vpy=149&dur=108&hovh=200&hovw=200&tx=66&ty=121&sig=110471226130991678334&page=1&tbnh=139&tbnw=125&start=0&ndsp=30&ved=1t:429,r:5,s:0) instead of that green circle.
3) A little less emphasis on the "5,1% vol." and make sure to use "vol." like this, please.
4) Instead of "Porto Alegre - Brasil" we decided to change it to "Porto Alegre - RS"... It would be cool if you could make it more visible, since it's the city name where our beer is brewed (more important than "5,1 vol.").
5) We think the mine cart could be worked a little better... some more details on it and on the emerald stones that are inside would be nice.
6) The background could have a little more of that aurora borealis/northen lights shade... With a green mist on the bottom and kind of puprle on the top. Give it a try, please.

Thank you for the attention and keep on that great work!

Best regards,

Gárgula Team.

I've sent the results of revision, as you convey in your comments. please re-design my correction,

thanks
Azkha

Hey there Azkha, how are you man? Nice adjustment on the new label!

But here are some new feedbacks on the #30 design!
1. We think it would be better if you took it off the emeralds on the top of the design, that have the alcohol porcentage and the volume of the beer. Just put then in the design where you think its better!
2. In the sentence "Produzida por mãos brasileiras" the word "mãos" should not be written with a capital M, but with tiny one!

Thats is for today, we think! Good luck in the rest of the competition!

Gárgula Team.

Hey Azkha, forgot one thing: you could try to make de mine cart a little more destroyed that it its!

Regards.

Gárgula Team.

ok I will try

Hi Boss, I've sent my revised design. Please return your corrections. Thanks for your responses and input to date

entri terbaru Saya # 34, # 35, # 36, # 37, silahkan koreksi lagi

Hello, azkha!
Sorry for the delay with our new feedback, but we've been having little time to administrate this tournament due to a lot of work here at the brewery. But let's get to business:
1) We like the idea of the "500ml" and "5.1% vol." cleared out from that green orb. So keep it that way, as you did with #48. By the way, dont forget about the final dot after "5.1% vol." They are well positioned in #48.
2) The new minecart you've designed (#48) looks better than the older ones. Keep that aswell.
3) We prefer the wheat crops you've designed with #19 and #20. The new one seems to dense (#48).
4) Try keeping the mountains on the background of the label and make the aurora borealis more evident please... It looks to simple with that dim green light only. The idea of having the top part purple to match the Gárgula logo is a good idea aswell (like in #21).
5) We prefer "Porto Alegre - RS" and the other information phrases to be under the minecart, near the bottom of the label (like you did in #48).
6) "Produzida por mãos brasileiras." could have a different color to call some attention to it. Also could have a more creative handwriting.
7) Keep the shape of the label as it was in #21... It's easier for us to print that way.

Thanks for the attention, azkha! Keep up that good work.

Gárgula Team