Hey, man! Thanks for the drawings... The ideas are nice and they've got potential. Just a few considerations based on our personal ideas: -> About #16: 1) Those "gargoyles" actually look like dragons... change that please. 2) The beer cup looks too much like a cartoon and the handwriting looks too simple. 3) Maybe using a bit of purple would have a nice outcome.
-> About #17: 1) The gargoyle looks to simple and cartoonish. The beer cup aswell... 2) Try using less black. Maybe fun colors would look better.
Thank you for the attention. Good luck on the contest!
Hello, Mega! Congratulations on the evolving of your new drawings... They look much better than the first ones. We have some feedback for you after our team meeting today: 1) The handwriting looks better now (#56 and #55), but we think you can make it a little less "childish". 2) Those new gargoyles you've came up with actually look like a shrimp (no offense). Please try redesigning them, since it's an important part of our logo.