Hello, heru! We had a new team meeting today and you've been selected to integrate our Top 5! Congratulations for the hard work you've done until now. We have some new feedback on your drawings to help with the designing for the next fase of the tournament: 1) We liked you #106 logo, but we want to suggest a few modifications for it: - The gargoyle must have a less "happy" face... Try making its face look more sarcastic, trickster... - About the beer cup, we were thinking about making the beer look more red (since we brew Red Ales, essencially) and the cup itself to be a TANKARD (such as this: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/1/1e/Tankard_pewter2.jpg - but transparent, so we can see the beer color). - We want the white circle that the gargoyle comes out from to actually BE THE MOON! Try adding some craters and stuff (http://www.respect-authority.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2009/02/moon_craters.jpg). - Last thing, we would like you to create a cool handwriting for the word "Gárgula" and place it following the lower outside edge of the logo. Remember to equilibrate the size of the drawing with the size of the handwriting.
Thank you and good luck on this next fase of our tournament.
Hey, heru! We like how fast you work... Good improvements, but let's get to the new feedbacks: - When I said tankard, I actually wanted you to change the shape of the cup aswell. And I also want it to be transpartent/translucid/glassmade so we can see the color of the beer (Red Beer this time please). - The handwriting seems interesting, but I don't think it needs that underlined and it could be worked out a little more (doesnt need to be a crazy handwriting, but it need to feel more unique). Another thing is that it might look better if it goes along/accompanys the bottom edge of the moon (like a semi-circle). - Altough you've changed the gargoyle's face, I still think it needs some work... The expression doesn't feel quite right to me. Try some research on "gargoyles" in google images. By the way, I liked the red constrast of the tongue from the first drawing. - Size equilibrium between the image and the letters... The gargoyle and the moon are to big compared to the letters.
Thanks for your attention! Looking foward to see your new drawings soon.