We like aspects of all of your designs, especially the way you have broken up the j2m in number 76. We would like to see number 76 without the green dot, maybe replaced by a globe? Also what does it look like with the Sustainable business solutions written in the font you have used for the word "systems" in 67 & 66.
As inspiration for you, we help companies to increase their performance in OH&S, Environment and Quality over time.
You will definitely be in our final designers so it is up to you how much you hold back but we would like to see some variations on what you have done. Colour of the tick, without the globe etc.
As my promise, here are the update designs... #82 done based on your request. #83 variation with the globe on the background of the text. #84 add the 'checkmark' on the M to represent 'qualified/successfull' in increasing performance of OH&S, Environment & Quality time as you mention.
Hope you love them... Any suggestion or request is welcome and appreciated.
Thanks for loving it! Same with me, #84 is the best. But I prefer tagline in sans font as new entries: #87 & #88, easy to read. About the color, personally I like #87...green & blue have a positif value.
You've split the directors as to which is our favourite (in a good way)! We are going to put one of the prmetations as number one to give people a good idea of what we want but won't put them all in the top ten (even though they are probably all up there)!
Thank you, we appreciate your quick response to our feedback and look forwards to working with you as one of our top 5!.
Thanks for the different variations you've done for us so far, we really appreciate it.
If possible can you make a couple of amendments to 88 for us? we would like to see it without the green tick and with the word sustainable in green? Also just without the tick and maybe some green in the globe?
We are also kean to see if you can come up with another different option for us? Use continous improvement and performance improvement as your inspiration.
#131 and #75 are our to preferred designs of yours. We would like to please see #75 with a gap between the J2M like it is in #131. Can we also remove the dot from above the J in #75?
If you have any other ideas that include an abstract mark to the left of the logo we would love to see them.
You're right, after tweaking #75 as you request to be #84, its looks simple & better. Also still good in monochrome/black and white mode as in photocopy or fax, would be like #85.
If you need an abstract mark (on the left), my suggestion is the J2M text no need to be stylized (like current design) in order to make it less busy. I'll give you some variation on this...
We are liking entry #143, can you incorporate some green into the logo so it stands off the page, without incorporating the globe features, as we we've seen this in your previous entries.
As my promise, here are variation designs with icon on the left: #168 & #169 Personally I prefer the logo without icon to bring audience focussed on the name of your business. Just my opinion.