Hello, Tyan. :)
Just wanted to express to you my enthusiasm for your business. I noticed that even though I've made revisions, I still have not impressed you well enough to be ranked first. May I ask, what else I may do to win your business and this contest? A different font, perhaps?
I've chosen this font so that, when it's shrunken down to the size of a clothing label, it's still readable. Have you tried makng all the entries as small as they would be, when put n a clothing tag/label inside a piece of clothing? I hope that is how you are judging the practicality (and appeal) of designs. :)
If you want me to do anything different at all, please tell me! :) I really want to give you the next great clothing identity! :)
Have a great day, Tyan!
Regards,
Jennifer1