Nice start. I have been waiting for that crosshair look. Try replacing 401k reconnaissance with 'Expert Guidance', 'The Advisor's Resource'. Can recon be a little bigger. Might be hard to see.
The crosshairs splitting the E in recon makes it tough to read. Could you slide recon to the left a little? I'd like to see some variations for 401k. Trying to figure out how to get you to #1. Can you make the 401k a fish eye look? How about make it look like it is magnified like a magnifying glass? What if it looked like it was on a half of a 'globe'. The center of 401k would be the largest, and it would fade a little towards the edges. The shading near the inside edge adds great depth. Maybe take recon out and place it on the outside of the scope. wrap it around the lower right part of the circle? I like your graphic the best, but need a little more to bump you to the top. Thanks.
yeah i think 'recon' will be hard to read specially when scaled down. I'll work on more samples and probably take recon out of the scope. Your suggestions are good and I think it will work. thanks for the feedback :)
I love 273 with the blue letters, but my wife loves 274. Her reservation with 273, and I agree, is that you lose some of the 1 in 401k. Can you make the scope bigger than 274 but smaller than 273? We need something in the middle. Or, the 1 needs to be more clear. Maybe it is the fading effect, which I like. Maybe you can just define the 1 outside of the scope and that will do it. I like the bigger scope, but need to know it's a 1. Thanks!
I still like the larger scope on 273. The scope on 281 could be a little bigger. How about putting it on a white background? Make sure the bottom of the 1 is defined. And try to leave just enough space of the top left of the 1 so you can tell it's the top part of a 1. In 273, the top of the 1 is solid blue, you can't see any of the right angle.
Try and get a little of the right angle on the top, and define it at the bottom of the 1.
Hi. these are the adjustments you requested. made the scope bigger, trimmed and moved and 1 slightly to the right and placed on white background. I placed it on a black background before to achieve the look i was aiming for which is a night vision scope. anyway, it works either way :)
Can you try some different fonts for 282? I like the scope, but wouldn't mind a different look for 401k recon. thanks. 259. Any wan to put recon back in the scope, curved along the bottom? Doesn't need to be centered. If we can fit the whole logo in the scope, I can use the logo in more ways.
Hi. been working on your logo specifically the revision on #259 fitting the whole text inside the scope. let me know if this one works :) will work on a different font for the other entry