The Ar’ticulate Space Logo Design Contest

how can I improve this for you? 
Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout etc).

Thank you.

Hi, Thank you for considering my work so far. I wondering if there are any changes you like to see feel free to ask, please..

Your feedback is always welcome.

Musical notes and Speech bubbles represent Voice and Speech coaching.

I just uploaded font variations. Please check #235 - #241

Still really love this and the concept is perfect. My partner thinks the writing is too hard to read. Any chance you could refine it a little? Perhaps a different font?

Thank you for the feedback,
I just uploaded the updated versions.
Please check my latest submissions #184 #185
Let me know your thoughts.

Regards,
Chan

Hi. I'm wondering if you could let me see what the logo looks like on a black background. White writing and red logo? Thanks

Thanks Chan. This is a beautiful design and I love the reference to space/planets.

Thank you for the updated ranking. If you need revisions or variations of my designs please feel free to ask. It would be greatly helpful to improve it.

Hello,

Congratulations on the launch of the logo contest.
I uploaded some proposals for your consideration.

The logomark is combination of musical notes and the planet.
Planet references Space.

Please give feedback if you need some variations or revisions. It would be greatly helpful to improve it. So that logo design will be according to what you looking for.
Thank you!

Best,

Chan