Nice, both! It now needs a general decision, if we're going with the style of your entries or with the "hand-drawn" style of another designer. In any case you are among our "top five" designers ;)
Yes, that way the chicken doesn't look like a cartoon character anymore. However, the overall impression isn't coherent anymore. Do you think it's possible to take design #37 and replace the rooster's head with the head of this hen?
Not bad. I like the flat bottom line. However the chicken looks even more like a cartoon character than before (that is something we want to exclude).
Please don't go further in that direction. We already got other entries with more realistic images of our own chicken (see updated brief). TY
Very nice design! Yes, right direction :)
In fact the chicken looks very much like the hens we breed (not the roosters ... I've attached a pic of one of our hens to the brief). Therefore maybe you can make the comb and wattles a bit smaller and make the eye less cartoon-like.
The arrangement of the image and type is nice too, maybe better than what I meant before (type going round on the top, design flat at the bottom ... see markup), but maybe you could give it a try that way too.
As the intention is to use the logo in the header on our website, I can imagine there it will look better with a flat bottom line. TY
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for text.
what do you thing?
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head revision.
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please check it out.
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on Rooster character.
am I in right direction?
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1 made some revision character Rooster on entry #61
please check it out.
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Please don't go further in that direction. We already got other entries with more realistic images of our own chicken (see updated brief). TY
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layout of text line and full vers1on of cube.
what do you thing?
any other suggest1on?
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character change.
and change the layout of text.
what do you th1ng?
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you can check your request on entr1 #56
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In fact the chicken looks very much like the hens we breed (not the roosters ... I've attached a pic of one of our hens to the brief). Therefore maybe you can make the comb and wattles a bit smaller and make the eye less cartoon-like.
The arrangement of the image and type is nice too, maybe better than what I meant before (type going round on the top, design flat at the bottom ... see markup), but maybe you could give it a try that way too.
As the intention is to use the logo in the header on our website, I can imagine there it will look better with a flat bottom line. TY
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what do you th1ng?
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simplify the rooster
flat di round background.
clean cube
am I in right direction?
also you can check another version on entry #36
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you can check my rev1sion on entry #37
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And the cube probably looks more cube-like without the vertical pattern. TY
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any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have 1st suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.
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