1) make the icon italic (like you have in other submissions - 125 for example)
2) make the font italic (like in 129)
3) put the icon to the left of the wordmark
With the final submissions, please provide:
1) A vector graphic of this logo
2) a mobile app icon of this icon (like 108, only italic and with red)
We're still really enthusiastic about this logo, but we're continuing to have concern that we haven't found a version of it that has the Letters really distinct without losing the impressions of the ticket. Can you try a few more variations on the theme and see if you can come up with something that really drives the letters in the icon to stand out, but doesn't obscure the ticket too much?
I'm still trying to balance the clarity of the "ticket" and "P/L" in the icon to the right place.
Let's try this:
(numbers I use below are of our current rankings)
1) on the icon here, remove the top "horizontal" bar on the inside of the L, to make the L more obvious. (I've uploaded a rough rendition of that)
2) in the Wordmark, do what you did on 3, taking the P/L from the icon into the wordmark.
3) As a variation, try filling in the P/L letters in the wordmark (like 2). Maybe one variation can fully open the middle of the P rather than just using the lines.
4) as another variation, try the wordmark all caps (like 4 but still italics), both with and without the 3 variation.
Moving into some final tweaking, this is where we want to start with finalizing out icon. Let's start by making the "L" more prominent. I've skitched up an outline of how we could really bring the "L" out and I'm going to upload it. My gut instinct is to try making the L Red, leave the P blue, and leave the non-letter space dark grey, as it is here.
In the end, I think it's more important for the P and L to be obvious than the fact that they form a ticket, although ideally both will be obvious.
Also, since the "dent" in the sides of the ticket makes the letters look like they have Serrif, can we take another pass at the wordmark that makes the P/L look more like they do in this icon?
There's a chance we would want to use our logo on a dark header background, something as dark as hex 292b2c. Do you think a variation of this could look good on a dark background?
Lastly, we really want our mobile app icon to look good. Is it possible to show us what you think that might look like?
I really like what you've done with the PL in the ticket. Can we play around with a few font variations, especially if you can find one with an "L" that more matches the one in the ticket?
This is a cool concept, but we're not a fan of the gold color. Do you have any ideas that might utilize the blue / gray / white color schemes that we've ranked higher (and maybe red, if you think it looks good)?
I could see gold potentially being used for the trophy color if it didn't dominate the whole logo.
We think it's really cool the way you made the white part of the curved ticket look like a 'P' (we're assuming that was on purpose). Curious to see if you have any other ideas similar to that.
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One small set of changes, and this is the winner:
1) make the icon italic (like you have in other submissions - 125 for example)
2) make the font italic (like in 129)
3) put the icon to the left of the wordmark
With the final submissions, please provide:
1) A vector graphic of this logo
2) a mobile app icon of this icon (like 108, only italic and with red)
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1) use the new wordmark from your most recent submission (maybe non-italic?) in the blue-red.
2) Change this font to all caps.
Thanks for all the effort on this!
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I'm still trying to balance the clarity of the "ticket" and "P/L" in the icon to the right place.
Let's try this:
(numbers I use below are of our current rankings)
1) on the icon here, remove the top "horizontal" bar on the inside of the L, to make the L more obvious. (I've uploaded a rough rendition of that)
2) in the Wordmark, do what you did on 3, taking the P/L from the icon into the wordmark.
3) As a variation, try filling in the P/L letters in the wordmark (like 2). Maybe one variation can fully open the middle of the P rather than just using the lines.
4) as another variation, try the wordmark all caps (like 4 but still italics), both with and without the 3 variation.
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In the end, I think it's more important for the P and L to be obvious than the fact that they form a ticket, although ideally both will be obvious.
Also, since the "dent" in the sides of the ticket makes the letters look like they have Serrif, can we take another pass at the wordmark that makes the P/L look more like they do in this icon?
let us know if you have any other thoughts!
Thanks so much for your amazing submission!
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There's a chance we would want to use our logo on a dark header background, something as dark as hex 292b2c. Do you think a variation of this could look good on a dark background?
Lastly, we really want our mobile app icon to look good. Is it possible to show us what you think that might look like?
Thank you!
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I could see gold potentially being used for the trophy color if it didn't dominate the whole logo.
Thank you!
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