Hi Raymer,
The number 24 layout in #2 is in the right direction. But we need the green and silver/grey chrome (diagonal design) areas to be recolored like in Herbalife24 logo. Please check this link to see what I'm referring to:
https://skitch.com/caisaya/82gju/herbalife24 As for the position of the number 24, we need them aligned with each other, you can keep them a bit overlapping. Make it very similar but without making the similarity too obvious.
On top of the 24 graphic, we need a small text with Herbalife logo (
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6112885/24fitclub/Herbalife.png I made an amateur changes to give you an idea) and Independent Distributor. Here's a similar design we want it to look like:
http://www.24sports.tv/catalog/view/theme/default/image/24sports_logo.pngAs for the fit club text, we need it to be beside the number 24 with a background similar to this shape:
https://skitch.com/caisaya/82gke/herbalife24-our-products or as seen on this shape:
http://www.24sports.tv/catalog/view/theme/default/image/24sports_logo.png we need the green monochrome color to have hex#6ec13f and hex#7CD300 colors and with an area for us to put our own tagline below it.
Let's see what you can come up with.
Thanks!