1909 Group Logo Design Contest
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If you need more change to this please let me know.
Thank you.
jlawatkins commented on #410
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Brown background/brown inner background - Blue stamp/blue text
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Blue background/blue inner background - White stamp/white text
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White background/white inner background - Black stamp/blue text
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White background/white inner background - Blue stamp/blue text
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White background/white inner background - Brown stamp/Brown text
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I can send you all this.
jlawatkins commented on #400
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May we have vectors (.eps files of) this treatment, plus:
White background/white inner background - Brown stamp/Brown text
White background/white inner background - Blue stamp/blue text
White background/white inner background - Black stamp/blue text
Blue background/blue inner background - White stamp/white text
Brown background/brown inner background - Blue stamp/blue text
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FYI, font treatment examples I have shown are, Entry #402 without shadow, and #403 with shadow.
Thank you.
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jlawatkins commented on #402
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jlawatkins commented on #400
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jlawatkins commented on #402
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ie. as per the feedback given in 389,
- Entry #398 / 399 . 400 / 401 are for background, stamp/font color
- Entry # 402 / 403 are only to show font spacing.
So that, it will be easy for you to decide from one of each above to combine.
I'm sending this way to make it easy for you, but sorry if I am confusing with too many files, and also sorry about taking too long for this revision, as I am doing it carefully without loosing the originality of design.
Please let me know if I have missed anything from your feedback.
Thank you.
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and #400 /401 - without.
Also if I have not got this correct or missed anything, please let me know.
Thank you.
jlawatkins commented on #345
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jlawatkins commented on #389
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This cleanliness on the 1909—also, sorry about this, with the 1909, a very tiny bit more kerning. That's what we think is working with that other font, but we like this one more.
Then, white outer background. Brown inner background, black lettering, black stamp.
And, because we're now on white, changing to the other stamp effect.
jlawatkins commented on #391
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Please let me know if any adjustment needed.
Thank you.
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jlawatkins commented on #345
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Thanks again, we appreciate all your work getting these just right.
jlawatkins commented on #381
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Can we see this one with a white outer background, white inner background, and then all the copy in that brown?
jlawatkins commented on #390
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It's now mainly color variations.
First, let's do everything on a white outer background going forward. Not inside the stamp treatment, just the outer palate on white so we can get a sense of how those colors are pulling and the stamp treatment is registering.
With the brown and blue colors locked, the color variations we'd like are:
white inner background - all brown font and stamp
white inner background - all navy font and stamp
white inner background - brown stamp/navy text
white inner background - black text (the monochrome iteration)
brown inner background - navy text and stamp
brown inner background - black text and stamp
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ie. 388 with, 389 - without - 390 - less.
So that you can compare all three to decide what more to be added or reduce.
Please let me know.
Thank you.
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jlawatkins commented on #388
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But could you remove some of the distressed artifacts outside the "1909" itself. Inside the font is fine, but if we clean up around it, the 1909 should stand out a bit more and we should be there.
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jlawatkins commented on #385
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The brown is locked.
The blue is locked.
The font is locked.
The font treatment is nearly there. Great work.
jlawatkins commented on #385
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jlawatkins commented on #383
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jlawatkins commented on #382
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jlawatkins commented on #345
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That way we can have a side by side comparison of which stamp treatment we want to land on. Once we pick that, and have the distressing on the final font face solid, we'll just be down to different color variations. Great work.
jlawatkins commented on #380
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Three tweaks to this specific look. Let's change the font to white. See if you can bring in some of the distressing & gradient from your submission in first place, and change the color on that stamp outline from black to the blue.
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I have put together, "1909" Font of Entry #345 , and font shadow treatment as I did in my Entry #174 .
stamp treatment and all other element from my other designs, as requested.
Other font is, Entry #363 font.
If all this ok, I can work on the color changes.
if I am missing anything or need any changes please let me know.
Await your feedback.
Thank you.
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jlawatkins commented on #345
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Await your feedback.
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"We are open to the background stamp treatment you've used here as a second option. For example, if/when we do a black and white version and the other doesn't register as well, etc"
Thank you
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"Saddle brown: We like the brown you've used here"
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Font option (Hope you will be interested in this font), my favorite design.
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Awaiting your feedback on these.
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I will send revision asap.
Thank you.
jlawatkins commented on #345
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Lots of notes in different places, sorry about that, it's the way the contest forces you to leave feedback. But please don't hesitate to reach out with any questions.
jlawatkins commented on #363
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jlawatkins commented on #345
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What we would like to see is, on the brown background version of this, is a white font with a drop shadow to give it some depth. Maybe in a complementary yellow/brown or something you feel works.
jlawatkins commented on #346
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Saddle brown: We like the brown you've used here,
Blue: We're thinking along the lines of a darker navy. Something like a RGB 27 54 93.
jlawatkins commented on #321
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jlawatkins commented on #345
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First, if it helps, let's break them down by element.
For the background, the stamp effect:
Our first choice is what you've used here.
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Please check revisions, #344 / 345 / 346 / 347
I have shown different color options here, If you wish to see more color/font options or need any other changes please let me know.
Thank you.
jlawatkins commented on #337
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If there any change you wish to see, (Font/Color Etc), please let me know :)
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If you need any changes please let me know :)
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jlawatkins commented on #220
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If you need more changes please let me know.
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jlawatkins commented on #220
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In looking at them, we feel the sweet spot is somewhere between the first three concepts.
What we like about these three:
The first one uses the brown/leather palate as a base which gives it a nice western, old-world feel while still staying classy and classic. The second maximizes the color palate and connotes what we do, and the third is a good start on the clean circle concept that will work well across all mediums.
How we can build on these:
1st Concept: The distressed concept is nice, but falls somewhat flat. It’s very minimalist—which we like—but the 1909 itself needs to stand out more and the smaller you go on this, the more you start to lose “group” entirely. For this designer: Perhaps there are notes to take from your Artisan Builders and Kissani Market concepts, while still staying true to that leathery base and look here. In other words, this is an excellent first look, we look forward to the next iteration of it.
2nd Concept: Excellent use of the color palate. This clean governmental look is very well done, but it should be cleaner. For example, we can remove the “est. 2021” and the “lobbying and political campaigns” copy. Specific for this designer: We like the font face for "1909" in this execution. The ‘Group’ treatment starts to feel a little airline-esque though. Also, perhaps a solid bezel around the outside? Sticking with this clean concept, there also might be ways to incorporate some of what you’ve done with your The Duke, Lejon, and B&B Supply work. If that feels too vague, feel free to follow up.
3rd Concept: The cleanest circular execution. It works well across platforms and with an inverted palate, well done. What we’d love to see here is less Art Deco. The font face for 1909 isn’t bad, but the ‘1’ starts to get a bit lost and the accompanying letters skew this too deco. It starts to suggest more of a design company. We’re also not a fan of the lines bisecting the circle itself. For this designer specifically: We like what you did for Bizzie Gold and can see some elements of that might work well if incorporated here.
For the fourth and fifth place designs: We like both of your fonts for 1909 quite a bit. The 4th place design has a nice western feel to the 1909 font and the 5th place font for 1909 does a good job being classic, professional, and works for government affairs. But in the overall designs, as you can see in the notes above, we’re gravitating more toward a circular concept. Look back at the first three designs and see how the direction you’ve started to go in could pivot and work in a round execution. We look forward to your follow-up submissions.
Overall, great work, we’re glad you’re the final five, we encourage you to build on what you’ve done. And we greatly appreciate all the submissions for this contest. Thank you.