Le DétecteurLogo Design Contest

First of all,

I would like to apologize for the time I made to provide feedback but we have a lot of work here.

#1

I apologize because I made a mistake in the description that I gave. I corrected it. In fact, this is not "security" but "safety". So your logo reference too much security in the sense of protecting a house against somebody. The logo must represent the safety of people against household accidents, fire, smoke, flood.

So your logo is too "police".

I will provide feedback about #2 and #3 in the present day.

Many thanks to both of you for this first round.

Kinds regards,

-- Duke

No problem...I read as security therefore I designed something that represented security. I will redo something for you

Hi,

Thank you for all the work you provided.

We saw your propositions and we have to make some adjustments.
I attach others logos we like into the brief to give you an more precise idea of what we expect.

After discussion, we prefer a more colorful logo that incorporates all the colors of the spectrum as FRK's own logo or this one (https://logotournament.com/images/entries/78941057915-223.jpg). Seeing the work already done, we like FRK's submitted proposals, but we would like to see more fun. Why not a very litte "cartoon" touch ?

We want more colors, because we don't want to be stuck with the choice of the colors for the website itself.

The logo must be more complex, more exotic and also more fun as shown by the sliders.

We like the idea in #13 and #14. It's a beginning.

Same for the font used, we'd like one more fun, less classic.

The house should be, if possible, a house with a smile, always keeping in mind the little cartoon touch.

Others drafts are for the moment too classic.

Thank you for your efforts, we are impatient to see your modifications !

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Duke

#13
Can you make the same thing but with all spectrum colors.
Can the house be more "alive", more fun. I mean with a smile for example.

#31
The name is "Le détecteur" and not "Le détectur". We like the colors. Can you put the logo at the left of the name, not above it. Can your house be more fun ?

#32

Same as I said about the colors of #13, and the house logo must be more smiling and fun.

#26

Can you use the spectrum colors. Can your house be more "alive" and fun. Like I said before, a cartoon touch will be appreciated


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Thank you for your efforts,

Duke

#41 : Is it possible to have a white outline around the house and the smile and eyes are more visible ?

#43 : Is it possible to see two versions of your logo : 1/ can your logo be more colorful et add eyes and smile inside the house. 2/ Just more colorful : spectrum colors.

#37 : The house in your logo looks too much like an arrow. We are not fans of the eyes and smile. Could you work with these new details?

#34 : If possible, we prefer to have more colors for the lines around the house and your house more "happy"


Thank you again for all your efforts, we are very close to the end of the contest. We are very impatient to see who will be the winner ! :D

^^
Duke