Good Night Stars™Logo Design Contest

My version,
thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #56)

New version,
thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #61)

new version,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #70)

can u make the colored tube in #61 that is surrounding the logo look like a puzzle... use colors red, oragne, yellow, blue, green. a "puzzle" piece is big for autism. the word night should be a diff shade of blue.
also ... instead of the colored puzzle tube, try just a colored puzzle star to dot the "i" in night. with red orange blue gree & yellow.

in #61: i love the silhouette image of the kids... but instead of them in a grassy field, can you make them in bed looking up at the night sky? my product is applied to the ceiling or wall and glows stars to lull them asleep.

new version,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #73)

#74 & #73 are very impressive... i have goosebumps! thank you so much.

in #73 & #74 Make just 4 of the stars in the sky : red yellow, blue, green. unbelievable!!!!

Update,
thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #75)

in #75 keep the blue gleaming star in the sky but change the another 4 colored ones to the smaller dot stars.
using green orange yellow and red

Update,

thanks for feedback! :)
Nat

(This comment references Entry #79)

new version (#86),

thanks!,
Nat

in #79, can you make white puffy clouds in the top of the puzzle? the colored twinkling stars can be in the clouds. My product is just like a skylight. it is a real photo of the serene blue sky with clouds and a ray of sunshine gleaming out from behind the clouds. At night when kids are in bed and the lights are out and tv off... a starry night sky appears with a couple of constellations and even a shooting star.

in #79 there are 3 yellow twinkling stars. can u make 2 of them green & orange, so that there's one of each: yellow blue green red & orange

Hi!,

thanks for your feedback. I think I understand about your product and what you want for the stars. But there should also be balance, contrast and equilibrium between the shapes and visual weight to make the logo consistent. Please let me know what you think about this version.

Thanks!,

Nat

(This comment references Entry #87)

#87 didn't work for me. looks too angelic. try a few smaller puffy clouds in the blue puzzle piece at top. no sunshine or stars in the clouds... keep them with color like in #79.

no problem. I´ll be back!

Nat

New version,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #88)

#88 doesn't work for me. just add a green twinkling star to #79. i can't think of anything else. . . it looks better without the clouds. have you got anything else?

But #79 already has a green one. Maybe too small.. I´ll update making the stars a bit bigger.

Nat

just had a new idea: in #88... bring Good Night Stars up where you have the clouds at the top. Have the clouds that are silhouetting the top of the slogan do it on the bottom of it with the same type of clouds. Underneath the bed make "The Perfect Nightlight" bigger with the clouds silhtte. on the top.

update,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #89)

new version,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #90)

Nice... in #90 omit the squiggly lines under the lower clouds and then move up the tag line.

in #90 for "the perfect nightlight" try a font like in # 58

It was that font, but only all caps and light.
Here you have a new version,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #94)

In #94 lets try outlining "Good Night Stars" in a thin midnight blue

Update,

Nat

(This comment references Entry #103)

in #103 the clouds coming out of "Good Night Stars" are sweet. any way to make them a little more puffy?

also in #103... make the dark blue outline closer to the letters with the clouds coming out all around "Good Night Stars" thanks looks great so far... almost there>

Update,

Thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #105)

I think I like #94 the best so far, with no outline. can you make the clouds under the bed have a greyish shadow on the bottom side....like the clouds in #127.

you have been right on point with listening to my feedback...this has been a wonderful experience. one last thing. in #94, can you make one of the corners look like it is peeling off a little bit like in #127

Update.
This is a really fun contest!!!
Thanks!,
Nat

(This comment references Entry #132)

It's a toss-up between #132 and #94. I really don't know which one I like better. Do the clouds at the bottom of 132 really add to the concept? I know that sometimes less is more. What do you think? This IS really fun. This logo tells the story of Good Night Stars yet leaves you wanting more. You've incorporated everything I can think of. I know that the official launch of this non-profit bus. will be just as fun. Thanks again Nat.

Tim Deer
Executive Director
The Good NIght Stars Corporation

Hi Tim,

You´re right. Most times Less is More :)

I think the logo is getting too crowded. In my opinion #94 is simple but say it all. As you said it tells the story. Everybody will understand what´s this about and I don´t think the clouds add a meaning to that story. If I have to vote I´d vote for #94.

I´ll be around in case you need me.

Thanks for a FUN contest! we´re always after fun contests!!

Nat

can you put a paper curl in one of the top corners... like the one in #130

Hi!,

unfortunately I can´t, because that´s something another designer came up with and it´s his concept. Actually no designer can use other designer´s ideas in their designs.
I see all designs are starting to look alike. Colors, layout, elements...

I´ll try to keep my design as clean as possible so it still looks good and all elements are readable in small sizes.

I will be around if you need me.

Thanks.

Nat

Thanks ... I understand. I will probably pick your logo by Fri. night. I've been going crazy over everything. This is my first time setting up a corporation. You are very talented... I wish you the best of luck in all your endevours.

Tim

Thanks for your comment Tim. You did really well as a Contest Holder. Most CHs who have many Contests running don´t even take the time to take care of their own projects. They don´t provide feedback or rank their entries and that is bad for their company. You did really well. You´ve been here for us all the time making us improve our work for you. I appreciate that.

I´ll be around in case you need me.

Thanks!,

Nat