both birds should be a little smaller, white bird should be touching the D, broken "N" on the bottom should be somewhat legible. Can we put a small amount of color to the white bird, maybe a patch somewhere? not sure. White bird is really big compared to everything else. I'd like to balance it all out as much as possible. Can the typeface be changed... feels temp... would love something presented as if it's here very strong, built by the papa bird, it's massive, it's special, it's been destroyed by the little bird... story. Thanks, this is one of my favorite for sure.