#38 / #39 - mine shows the outline of a man standing on anvil and raising a hammer - seemingly rising from the flames like a phoenix. "Humani" is a dark gradient, if it's too dark, can lighten it up a bit - it shows up fine on my computer, but monitors are all different, of course, so it may be too dark for you. If so, just let me know.
... But it could be nice to see some more elegance in the font ... and try to make the flame Blue or something ... its a bit too "flame tattoo up on the arm" ish... u know ... i like the idea of it ... but try make it more smooth / elegant and the font .. try make it ... more elegant too
excellent - thanks for the feedback. I look for some more elegant fonts. I should have some new options up either tonight (it's 6pm here currently) or by early afternoon tomorrow.
#48 here' a version with a rocky landscape and lightning in the background. If you like this direction I can improve it - just wanted to get a version in quickly while i had it fresh in my mind. :)
Nice work... Try to work with #46 i like the slim flame... just the font now... i like this font way better than the other one... but there are 2 things...
1. Can you change it into something even more elegant .. again i must refer to #9 .. i like that type alot...
2. Can you make both names (HUMANI ... and REBORN) standing equally big... Its nice since both names contains 6 letters... Want i want to do is to be able to have that option to take away the flame if ever needed.
"I vote for #46 with the icon shape of #38. One question though, what is the man holding in his hand? Could it either be made more visible/easy to understand what he is holding or be changed to a fist?"
I kinda agree... the first flame is actually more significant... Try make it in blue with:
I'll try and space it out a bit more - that may be the elegant aspect you like. I'll work on a dividing element, too - however, I don't want infringe on denzu's work.
I'll work up a few options of the flame for you to pick from (as well as the fist vs hammer)
Here are some variations in type, type treatment and flame shape. #67 has a larger, more clear hammer - the others have a raised fist. Feel free to mix and match :) Any other options or variations that you'd like to see, please just let me know.
Nice ... we getting there :0) ... Can you do 2 things for me ...
1. can you make the font color more plain... (not TOO plain..) but just a little more plain and readable from distance :0) try a few options just without the "egg" ... so we can see it standing alone... and maybe do 1 or 2 thing with the font so its not just a font from the font-libary :0) u know ?
2. Once we have that taken care of ... we wanna see one with hammer and without ... (with the decided color and adjustment to the font) ...
I dulled the shine down a little bit on all of them - I think the high contrast may have been making it harder to read.
#75 - I adjusted some font characters to customize the letters and imply that it's bent/altered. I also added some static / electricity running through the word REBORN.
#74 - the concept was to make it feel like still-cooling metal - the metal version of being "reborn"
Yeeeeah... try put #73 into #64 ... With and without the hammer... and i think were there... And if you can .. make both scenarios with white bagground !... Thatll be awesome ... Ty
#78 is reversed out onto white. #79 is solid black and smaller, just to see how it would look it if needed to be printed small & cheap...even stamped. I think it looks pretty cool just black.
If you don't like the white version, we could always just use it in a black box / shape.
I LOVE the #79 ... and i actually think i love that more than the other ones :0) ... How would that look like in white on black background ... Still the same melancholy style... ...
Nice Josh ... This is the one ... If you come up with some sharpening adjustments feel free to post em ... I dont have any clue if theres any "Final" touch to it ... But you must know :0)
GJ ...
Also ... im not quite sure how it works ... u just send us a few files i know.. but ... can we maybe contact you in for future additions etc... ?!