We really like this creativity with both logos. We would like more with the text on the first entry, maybe add some color. The 2nd entry is good with the color but we like a contrast of different color on 12th and note.
#64 - using the negative space to show notes. i've been adjusting the graphic as we go, so if you want to see a particular combination of text and mark, let me know! thanks!
#69, #70 - i added the leader line in the text, one has the highlights on the black keys, one doesn't #71, #72 - both have a new 12 and the line, but i also changed the 'th' as another consideration
thank you for the feedback! please don't hesitate to ask to see more. i will continue to work things out. thanks!