Sorry for withdrawing my update works many times. There is designer here that over act by protecting almost all element of his design, even for common element such as rectangle background around text. Make me hard to develop my current design further. I think it's deadlock for me and I should be stop to try on your contest. Thanks.
#52, #53 update work. I hope you understand that I want to pull out, just because I can't do my best in your contest. Win or lose is relative, but it's turn frustrating when my effort limited by other interest . However, I really appreciate your goodwill to involve in the logo design process, thank you so much! I will continue to do my best when I am in the right circumstances.
Can you make the font smaller in electrical contracting and add the word division ?
Should read Electrical Contracting Division
Can you also make the font bigger or taller on 1-800 NY BULBS ?
That needs to always be the dominant message.
The outline looks great. Maybe use a lighter silver color inside the outline as fill for the electrical contracting division text. We are appreciating your work and response - thank you
#54 - perfect. we love this design. if your entry is selected as the winner would you be willing to show us a second option without the word "contracting" included? thanks!
#56, #57, and #58 update work. Frankly, make the text blended on cable/wire also claimed already by the same designer who protect rectangle background :)
On design 56 we feel we are very close. The text electrical contracting division is hard to read. How would it look in the same gold as the bulb ? Also the lowest portion of bulb needs some work. Look at an actual bulb or google the image and see if we can't make the base a bit more realistic looking.
All we want is easy to read font when on the side of vans. These hybrid fonts w colors don't work. One bold color is what we need. Gold or silver are fine. We also need a more realistic base to the bulb. The lowest portion should look like a solid disk
Looks good - can you make the shadow in the bulb of 63 more like that of 56 ?
We like the sharding in the bulb better in 56. Can you outline the font of electrical contracting division so it stands out a bit more ? Use the same grey (it's fine) as fill. The screws on the base are a bit harsh can you soften ? All else looks good
#65 update work. I am sorry, currently I also work for other projects, made me a little bit miss attention on your direction detail. As I've forgot to outlining the bulb on #56, I hope I didn't miss everything on #65. Thanks.