It's an interesting take. I'd like stronger, sharper colors and I was figuring that the 1 circle should be red as that is strongest and that's our main price point. Also, you wrote stories instead of stores.
Hi, I've had to make some changes in my requirements. First, It became apparent to me that my desire to make a logo that could split between two signs was too difficult and risked confusing customers and also was probably limiting the designers' creative options.So I've decided to just ask for the best logo possible for one side. What I'll probably end up doing is putting it on the large sign on the left and then repeating the dot part of the logo on the right side. This will give you the freedom to play the layout of the dots and wording instead of restricting you to a long, narrow logo. Also, it just occurred to me that the sign will be back-lit and that makes it hard make black letters work. I've changed the requirements on my main page accordingly so you might want to take a look. Lastly, do you think you could show me the design with the dots in red, green and blue? Remember, that's the key to my whole pricing concept and I want to communicate that in my logo. Thanks for your great work so far, Roy