Re #9: Thank you for the changes. I understand your expertise and wanting to create a cross-platform image that works well everywhere. In the case of this brand, it will only be used in desktop publishing and online. You are the only one, however, that used the basic building blocks of our existing logo to tie the line to the corporate brand and I think you're on to something here. If you look at the higher ranking submissions, you'll see that they have a touch of effect that is tastefully used. That is what we are hoping to see. Thanks!