Likes: -Character appears athletic -No question he is holding/selling comic books -Took the time to add detail to the comic books - Hat -Shoes/boots -"I Got Issues" font and bubble
Suggestions: -Give more overall color variety -Make clothes more contemporary, longer tshirt, somewhat baggy pants. (Hip-Hop look?) -Turn hat around -Try different font styles for "Comic Book Lounge" portion -Don't be afraid to freelance a bit. You may just come up with something better than I have in my head.
Likes: -From the waist up character is on point, no need to change him Suggestions: -Put esclamation point after, "I Got Issues!" -Give letters a more comic book look, just want to get a different look -Pants are okay, prefer more baggy look -Have character stand on "Comic Book Lounge" block or even have him standing on a couch -Want the character to convey the lounge aspect of the business also
-Can you put something on the shirt? Like Spiderman's face/logo or Capt America's shield. Again don't be afraid to play with it or even change his shirt color.
Suggestions: -Add more overall detail -The face on the #2 ranked logo is what I'm looking for. The only reason its not ranked #1 is because the character is not black.