I'm really liking the way you are laying with the lights and tones. Still, have a few comments to see if it can evolve: - take the lettering arrangement of the #29. If you can make the letter a bit more smooth, less square, would be interesting - take the symbol of #32 and do the following: rotate it a bit counter clockwise (aiming for the angle of the one in # 29) and try to make darker the 2 points of the RED shape that are vertically aligned with the grey shape, so that it makes an effect of " vertical continuity" of the grey vertical leg of the R. get it?
Beyond that, I'm still looking for a plus: your pieces are aesthetically beautiful, but when I look at it, still can't catch quickly what it is all about. Still there is a need for some playful/funky intervention that allows people to understand faster that it is related to photos/cameras.
Hello. The camera element in #47 and # 49 are too literal. If its possible to work on a bit more abstract interpretation it would be interesting. Thanks!