On number 27, can we see it in a similiar format but stretched less horizontally? I think the best example of this logo is going to be a bit more square than rectangular.
On number 44 and the other designs you submit with the Zil Photography laid out vertically, I think the client really wants to see the Z offset down and to the right to where the z is outside of the box a hair. Something like the link below except there doesn't need to be a red background, I just used that to make it easy to see the offset z on the inside box.