Hi Nafaz, thank you so much! - the bigger 'Mentor' is on the right track. I love this design - however even with the bigger mentor, legibility is still an issue for me. If the logo was to be printed on a pen or is at the bottom of a slide in a PowerPoint presentation - the audience may find it hard to read. If they cannot read it - they are less likely to recall it and then look me up to do business. I would love it if you had time to play around with it, maybe with a slightly less stylised font. Even do something quite different, but with the same distinctive flair. It would be great to see the 3 words "Your Style Mentor" in a row - or downplay the word "your" and emphasise the words "Style Mentor". thank you very much for the time you have spent on this. YSM