Your Story My PenLogo Design Contest

Thanks for trying! I don't think this works for me.

Here is a new proposal. I think that the link between the speech bubble ("your story") and the pen is easier to see.

Please let me know if you need any improvement.

Best regards,
Ronan

Hi,

Thanks for your feedback.

The circle is here to make a speech bubble with the pen ("your story")

I'm gonna try to improve that :)

Hi spiritz. This idea has potential...I don't understand the circle and would prefer a modern pen over a pencil. It would also need the slogan underneath.